EVERY WORD I SENT, IN ORDER
The entire July 4 sale - nothing rewritten, nothing cleaned up. Tap any card to copy it. Steal the structure, not the words.
Download the PDFThe 8 Emails
Preview: RUN, don't walk!
THE MOVE
The outcome is described in objects, not feelings. Potato salad. A ringer you have to turn off. Not "financial freedom." The sale is one line, seven lines down.
Preview: half off all weekend, baby!
THE MOVE
A second email the same day, and it works because the story moved. She left, she arrived, Mickey is here. The double-send objection gets handled by joking about her own inbox before anyone can be annoyed.
Preview: it can be a force for good.
THE MOVE
Proof told as a morning, not a claim. Three excited kids, a pool day, a husband who doesn't rush back. Note: "the lowest price it will ever be" is the one line I'd take back. It's a promise you have to keep forever. Use "the lowest it's been" instead.
Preview: life is good.
THE MOVE
Name the implausible thing yourself. "This is a pre-scheduled email" arrives before the reader can think it, so the doubt never forms and everything after it reads as honest.
Preview: hear me out on thisβ¦
THE MOVE
This is the email that gives everything away. A complete lesson, four examples from outside my world, and the pitch is one line at the bottom. It pays for the other seven by proving the thing it's selling.
Preview: it's common!
THE MOVE
Name the mechanism, then let her off the hook. Three excuses dismissed in one sentence, the real problem named, then "accidentally, without knowing it" so she can agree without feeling stupid.
Preview: and i wanna give it to YOU
THE MOVE
The last full day is the most specific day. "Four AI batching assistants, one for stories, one for carousels, one for reels, one for emails" against day one's "everything in my shop." Specificity escalates, volume doesn't.
Preview: understand why your audience isn't buying like you think they should
THE MOVE
Four "last call to" lines, and not one says "last call to buy." The deadline is attached to what she wants, not to the cart. The final line closes the loop the whole weekend opened.
The Announcement Story
THE MOVE
"I just remembered I have free will" is the line that makes the whole sale read as a whim instead of a need. And the proof arrives before the pitch: "paid for by digital products," stated as a fact about the trip, not a claim about results.
The Automation (behind JULY4)
THE MOVE
Grant, then ask. "You got it!" comes before "What's your email address?" so the email feels like a detail on the way to a thing she already has, not a toll. And INSANEEEEE has five E's on purpose - that's the tell that a human wrote it.